Business School Sample Essays

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    Fuqua (Duke University): Accepted

Why me?

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    University of Michigan: Denied

Significant Achievement

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    University of Michigan: Accepted

School Specific

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    Wharton (University of Pennsylvania): Denied

Work experience

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    Stern (New York University): Denied